Love in the Moonlight

Silently you kiss me
In the silky moonlight
It bounces off your face
And dances in your eyes
I gasp as your hands travel
Slowly, ever slowly

Our bodies move together
As we walk in the moonlight
Through the ice cold night
We never notice
Never notice anything
And you kiss me
Silently kiss me

My mind races
My body surrenders to yours

Our lips part

And tongues combine

As the moon glimmers above the trees

We make love in the moonlight

Under the ever-shining moon

Author notes

Picture 3 prompt

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Meroza
December 15, 2008

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This is such an unque style for erotic, it was refreshing to read. You tell a tale of such beauty and a silver moon, I like that.

Well done and best of luck
roninwort
December 11, 2008

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Smooth
It flows together amazingly! I must have read it like 10 times lol. Beautiful job!
Lady Michaella
November 13, 2008
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beautiful.

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Riderless Diamond
November 12, 2008
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beautifull
ears2hearyou
November 9, 2008

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loved it...so smooth and sensuously written...touches
of ink and air...as you slowly write the perfection of
seductive love enjoyed under the moonlight's ever
shining moon....lovely ink you used!
ears/Seattle well done! well done!