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Natures Arousal

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Laying there upon the sand
Water rushing onto the land
Naked as the day we’re born
Here together, never forlorn

A gentle touch, his sweet caress
The sun touches down upon her breast
Feeling like we’re the only two
In a world left, just me and you

Her body’s a’ tingle, orgasm near
Its her screaming pleasure that you hear
At last they join, both as one
In an age old dance, that’s always done

‘After orgasm, body goes slack
Rushing waves still do attack
Sensations making arousal come back’

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  • Deceits Tears silver member
    December 4, 2008

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    You write these soooo very well
    Impressive as always
    Congratulations on the HM
    Be Well


  • ckwriter69
    November 22, 2008

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    Wow, this is hot and I love the pic. nice rhyming Jen and way to bring out those hot moments we all love. Congrats on the HM. Keep writing.


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    November 7, 2008

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    mmmmm, this was like a drink of coool water on a hot day, or in this case the reverse, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest