My Aching Love
W. Peter Sanci
I come to you, a victim of you’re love.
I have nothing left to give you.
But myself and all that I have within me.
To you who has so much.
Whose life has been so full.
My life means little to you.
But my love for you is great.
For you my heart is like a book.
Please take you’re magic key and unlock
My broken heart.
Author notes
HI again everybody ! I hope you all enjoy my new poem.
A contest entry
- Big Emotion... by Walking Oxymoron.
550 points, ended November 22, 2008, 23 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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How sad! Yes, it's hard when someone else has the power to solve everything within you, particularly when that someone is unaware of their power.
Great write. -
is this a play on that song "my endless love?" cause that's the first thing i thought of when i read the title, great poem, i like where you went with the idea of big emotion, best of luck in the contest
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