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Love Devine

You are the Ring on my finger.
You are the tie that binds.
Love never ending.
Love devine.

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  • amysticwriter silver member
    March 29
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    I like it..my husband has passed, but I still wear our ring...


  • Denerica
    March 16
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    Short and sweet and from the heart. Beautiful Blessings.


  • Mariana gold member
    November 21, 2008
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    Beautiful!

    So beautiful...such simplicity and love using so few words. Well done
    Mariana


  • catz Moderators member
    November 16, 2008

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    What a sweet poem, much sincere feeling going on here, my friend, Lucky the lady who has these special words held for here

    A beautiful piece, Ed

    Dee


  • painfulpleasures313
    November 13, 2008
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    sweet. simple. amazing how just a few words created together can say so much

  • goalsv
    November 7, 2008
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    Short and sweet with beautiful rhyme. Very good my friend.


  • Sunkissed xo
    November 7, 2008
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    I do like it very much
    Such a sweet image you create her, so bright and tender! I love the metaphor of a "ring on my finger" and the "tie that binds". so beautiful
    thanks so much for entering the contest, very best of luck in it!

    Chin up,
    Summer Moon xx

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