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Longing to Wait No More

 

You let too many people fall in love with you.

And I just happened to be one of those fools.

Now, what am I to do?

Can’t waste my time on you, no, no.

 

God knows I am so confused.

I still want to be your friend but it’s so hard to do.

To talk to you, while someone else holds you.

It just eats away at me.

It’s driving me crazy, you know.

 

I’ve been cursed with waiting to long.

Even when I cared for you all along.

And you finally moved on & now I’m all alone... Again

 

This sort of shit always happens to me.

I’m not sure but it seems like some sort of disease.

Now I see, I can set myself free.

From your grasp, & I’m never looking back, no, no.

 

Come to find out I don’t need you anymore.

No need to seek for the "secret cure."

I've overcome this festering disease of you.

And I'm stronger now for the shit you put me through.

 

I realize you were never worth my time.

What can I say, I let you go, now how is that a crime?

Pack your shit... Good riddance and Goodbye.

 

I’ve been cursed with waiting to long.

Even when I cared for you all along.

And you finally moved on & now I’m all alone... Again

 

 


 

 

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  • XTearsInTheRainX
    October 26
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    This is a really good piece i love the emotion that you have put into it...My favorite lines were I realize you were never worth my time.

    What can I say, I let you go, now how is that a crime?

    Pack your shit... Good riddance and Goodbye....keep up the good work


  • Rachael09
    October 22

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    This is a very nice piece. Filled with so much emotion.You know, the best poems out there are the ones that you can relate to and the ones that bring the emotion out in you. I'm thankful for poetry like yours, it keeps me going. Brilliant! Keep up the great work!!

  • Gosh. This is just genius. It really paints a picture and the emotion is intense. Good read!


  • freddiepoe
    October 14
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    This is very good, I love the opening two verses!!

  • This was good, Very sad in a way well too me. But this was good. I enjoyed reading this. It was very well written. Anyways. keep up the good work.


  • Darkend Light
    August 22
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    this is a great piece. i can really relate.

  • ooooh i love this its raw gut and yet it has a nice tender ambience,,, would be great sung
    im glad i found you,,,you have talent
    T


    • ForeverTorn gold member
      July 21
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      Thank you very much... I'll have to get the recording on here eventually

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