Come swim to my maiden, I'm waiting for you here
I've parted swollen waters so you need have no fear
Within the swell a Castle that's made of coral bright
Sea horses come the greet you to bring you home tonight.
The ocean holds a kingdom, where we will rule once more
You'll see knights in pearl armour and hear sea dragons roar
There'll be no need for fighting for love is all you need
Salt water bathed my subjects and washed away their greed.
The wizards wand is waving as star fish light the way
Within the realm of Seamoon you'll watch fish angel play
A new song for the dawning of dreams that will come true
Come swim to me my maiden, I'm waiting here for you.
Author notes
Prompt " The Calling" Artist Jim Warren
A contest entry
- Picture Inspired Poems by ennovy.
700 points, ended November 21, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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A new song for the dawning of dreams that will come true
Come swim to me my maiden, I'm waiting here for you.
Really nice Ros. The beginning just burst out, and then the piece nicely and sweetly closed like a goodnight kiss.
Beautifull orchestrated, with what I think is exactly the right amount of heat.
Splendid fairytale, best wishes
jin
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This is a very vivid imagery and the write gave us a fairy tale of romance...Thank you entering...Novy & Brazos
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Nicely done! lot of images, and moreover simple to understand unlike crammed poems with incomprehensible language. this is soothing, simple, visual and beautiful!
Love and light,
Lencio
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Jim Warren, one of the very best of the fantasty aritst, this is a highly evocative painting and a very fine mate, indeed, to your own fine poem here...
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well done
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the flow is superb and the picture i see in my mind from this is beautiful. ive only got one question.
can i come ??
-andi
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