Relaxing sleeping the day away
Not a care in the world
Lemonade watching the clouds go by
Drowning everything out
Comfortable soft
Bliss just finding yourself
Author notes
I know this is not long but you said just flow and get what came to mind right off so that is what I did not really any thought in this what so ever just flowing as I had it come to me form what I saw
Written January 31st, 2004
A contest entry
- I dont want your poetry....(photo contest) by Bigmammajen.
300 points, ended February 7, 2004, 50 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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hmmm...summer time! a time to drift! this si a wonderful poem! keep it up!
liz
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Hi...sorry I didn't leave any comment on your poem... emotions, you know
It was very personal, touching, sensitive... so the format didn't preoccupy me... I was thinking about you.
This one here (Drifting) is something I'd like to feel more often and when I read it, you succeeded
Very nice. xx
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sympathetic
a paradisic demise fir the chair.not just put out to pasture,but retired for many years of faithful service and rewarded by being able to live out its days in the splendor of nature. -
A hazy lazy day for a discarded chair, lemonade and sky... short but love it!! well done in the Contest.~~wishintreeUK~~
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I like it. a happy poem for this lil chair.
My grandpa used to have an old recliner sort of chair that he recovered in a plastic sort of material, and used to sit in it when we went camping. lol such a hard life outdoors for him.
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It's nice to see that this chair has some happy moments. L liked the image of drinking lemonade just enjoying the lazy days of summer feeling.
Great Job
Catherine -
Now that's more like it. You have turned that old chair into an oasis. I like it!
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