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Searching for Rationality

When the stars shine bright,
All seems right,
As if the world,
Everything should lay before our feet,
Why is it I wonder,
That acceptance is such a struggle,
Fighting,
Waging an unscrupulous war,
The foe as always,
Is myself,
Voices,
Souls,
Personas,
They fight each other,
For that thing which,
They cannot understand,
That which had been denied,
True unabated happiness.

Author notes

The inner turmoil of the soul is something that can eat away at a person and make it to where they can no longer see happiness even when it is right in front of them. I see happiness and I see love, the truth of these things is unfettered and true. -Yawgmoth

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  • Desire gold member
    November 21, 2008
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    Oh My~

    Aaaaaaaw this is another Powerful piece Precious and I hope college is going well for You~
    Love to hear how You are doing~
    Wish You much Happiness and Healing
    This is another piece which tugs
    at the Heartstrings
    Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet One
    Best wishes too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • Arabella
    November 16, 2008

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    Nice

    C'est vrai, et comme habitude, je l'aime. Comment though, I have an issue with the commas. I don't understand your usage of them.