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Inspire Me

I may be young
I may be depressed
It is not who i am
Part of me nonetheless.

I may be bulimic
I may be a cutter
It is how i cope
Stemming from a life of clutter.

Despite all this
I know how to live.
I am strong.
I know how to give.

I can help you out
of any situation.
I can run faster
than most in the nation.
I can paint a picture
using my speech.
I can write a poem
with out a stall or screech.
I can talk sweet
and make you feel nice.
I can make a living
off  my experience and advice.

I may have some disadvantage
But it is no excuse.
Because I have ability
And I put it to use.



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  • starving4perfection
    November 9, 2008
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    great poem hun keep it up


  • CountryCousin
    November 7, 2008
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    Wonderful.


  • Titus gold member
    November 7, 2008

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    well, having read this piece, I very much if you'll need ot cut any more, you have mnay who love you on this site, don't lose that. Sir William


  • Edited
    November 7, 2008

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    a beautiful write.
    good will forever overcome the bad.
    all the best in your future.
    may your abilities bring you the fulfillment you so desire.


  • HisLove
    November 7, 2008

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    This is a very inspirational poem full of hope. No matter what the situation is, don't look at the things that hinder but focus on what you can do. I loved it.

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