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November Love

So far away,
you dont notice me,
standing there behind you,
loving from a distance.
You laugh and play with me,
like we're just best friends,
but there is more to the glint in my eyes,
there's something in my heart that i hide.
Slowly but surely I'm falling for you,
no i dont want to,
but i cant help it.
Vampire teeth,
red-brown hair,
a nice big smile,
for everyone everywhere.
You smile at me once,
and my heart starts to sing,
then you smile for her,
then my heart starts to sting.
I cry silent tears,
within my little world,
I fantasize about us,
alone,
but i dont say a word.
Today I'll bear my heart,
for all the world to see,
and i hope that they will take it,
and love the best of me.

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Stalker or Crush?

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  • love it

    i really know how u feel.


  • Sorrow is the name
    November 20, 2008
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    Well Done


  • Sorrow is the name
    November 20, 2008
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    This Is Very Good

    This Is Such A Great Write
    I Reaaly And Truly Liked It

    Thank you for enterin and Good Luck

  • PsychoticTayTay
    November 10, 2008
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    Crush

    its very cute i love it i no how u feel about it


  • Bleed the truth X
    November 8, 2008

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    awwz...this is sweet.
    & i know exactly how you feel...it sucks
    but you gotta ebrace who you are no matter what happens. the best people will love you for the way you are. : ]


  • PaulieWantACracker
    November 7, 2008

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    wow i like this one but i would say.. crush.....or is it stalker..... omg jk

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