~forever~
time lacks end
unseen eyes echo
sun bleeding goodbye
within scattered illusions
corrupted torment and rage
darkness infected, perishing
immorality beholds perpetuity
~eternity~
perpetuity beholds immorality
perishing, infected darkness
rage and torment corrupted
illusions scattered within
goodbye bleeding sun
echo eyes unseen
end lacks time
~forever~
Author notes
An egg 
Ok so I thought I would try my hand at a Palindrome.
Also Known as Mirrored Poetry
A palindrome, by definition, is a word, phrase, verse, sentence, or even poem that reads the same
forward or backward. It stems from the Greek word palindromos: palin, meaning again, and
dromos, meaning a running. Combining the two together, the Greek meaning gives us, running
back again...
It really wasn't as hard as some forms I've tried, thats if I got it right of course..lol. And as the title says its just mindless thoughts 
Picture credit: Me
A contest entry
- Just arrived by special delivery by Black Rayne.
500 points, ended November 12, 2008, 11 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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oh wow! o.o
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Lol! told you it was a fantastic poem!
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OMG!!! This is wonderful. I haven't seen this form before. You nailed it my lady.
I might just have to give this one a try.
Thank you for sharing this with me.
Congrats on the silver.
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This is my fave form I didn't get it anywhere near as good as it can be. Its supposed to tell a different story in reverse than it does forward. If done properly it can be amazing. I'll keep my eye out for yours
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This is such a beautiful poem...not just in form but the words are amazing! Bravo! These are my favourite lines:-
'sun bleeding goodbye
within scattered illusions'
WOW
Mariana
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This is absolutely amazing! I am so impressed with this! I wrote a two ended acrostic but it pales in comparison to this! Wow!
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This is brilliant. I see why you call it your best. the flow is amazing and so is the pattern your poetry forms. The silver was well deserved for this piece. Excellence.
Great work.
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This is a fantastic egg, definitely better than I could ever hope to do at this damn form
... Congrats on the well-deserved silver
L.
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Wooo Hooo.....congrats on that Silver baby!!
Well-deserved,
Bear ~
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A...Muse...Sings Forever
A propos that the palindrome oscillates between the pit and the pendulum forever in time with time - especially 'just arrived by special delivery'
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Standing ovation in, Arkansas!
Arkansas in ovation, standing!
Everything from the Presentation....Your own Picture....Fonts.....Form aesthetics and worded message is Flawless to a *T* ~
There is only praise to give here......you have done well Pink......I would like to place this onto my page if you do not mind?
Bravo!
God bless you!
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Thanks, it wasn't as hard as I thought it would be once I got going, I think its the getting going that puts people off...lol. Sure I would be honoured if you put it on your page! Thanks for the great comment
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*just sighs* everyone can do this form... but me...
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The egg form is brilliant
as are your words that paint sorrows and darkness
Good luck in the contest Sis
Julie xx
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WOW - great job!! The shape is beautiful, perfect! And the wording/images also!
best wishes in your contest.
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wow. good job. i like how this turned out! i like how well the words flowed together. great job!
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Wow!!! Seriously Impressive...
You've done this flawlessly with a rhythm that flows seamlessly... You make it look easy but I imagine the reality is an intense headache... lol!
Wonderful, intense & well crafted narrative that enthralled throughout...
Well done!!!
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Holy Moses!! You have nailed that form hunny! It reads perfectly both ways.. and each way gives a similar yet slightly different feel!
Bravo!
Love the write, the feeling of endless melancholy!
And yayyy for using a picture you made
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This is so great......such a hard form and you managed it amazingly! awesome poem
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This is a fantastic Palindrome
one of the most difficult poetic forms to exicute and you have done it to perfection -
you know i may try my head at this, you did a great job on this my friend, wonderfully done, keep it flowing
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Wonderful job Lady,
I think you did a great job and even moreso that you took it upon yourself to take your own challenge and master it.
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WOW!! Mommy you did a brilliant job with this poem.. the form is outstanding.. I love this.. your word choices are excellent as always.. of course you know that I'm your Biggest Fan... I'm glad that you can write form poetry, I've tried managed to get 6 lines & a migraine to boot.
I love you
kat
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Sensatickly...
The form is beautiful (I''l have to try it).
The content is what shines so darkly. The story that is told and the feelings it conveyed are remarkable.
This poem was destined to live.
Wolf
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Ouch! it made my head hurt
just thinking about trying
to write it..
You did a fabulous job!
I agree with the comment below
flawless flow and intense word selection
combinded with the structure
make for a remarkable read!
Outstanding work!
Love this!
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Lady... This is a great example of the palidrome. Your words are intense and they flow with ease. I adore that you took part in your own challenge
This form is amazing, and I think you had a wonderful idea for the challenge.
Always,
Mel
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Thanks I thought I would give it a whirl, see what all the fuss was about
Besides if I ask someone to do something I like to know I can to it to...lol.
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