The beautiful Castle of the sea
Has been around for hundreds of years
It's only visible on Daughters day
That's why one can see it as it appears
It's calling all the daughters home
Who have swam so far away
You will see them in the sea
But only on Daughters day
They live among us here on Earth
You may have know one as a friend
They are beautiful, kind and loving too
And their gentleness has no end
So when you see the Castle
Hurry down to the Seashore
You'll see the beautiful maidens
Swim back home for evermore
Author notes
Artist: Jim Warren
A contest entry
- Picture Inspired Poems by ennovy.
700 points, ended November 21, 2008, 19 entries
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soundsvery romantic,,we dont have daughters day...good luck
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Hi Pete:
We don't have daughters day either, that I know of. It was just something I wrote for the fantasy poem. Thanks for reading.
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Very intresting take on this picture...clever & unique.......Thank you for entering Novy & Brazos
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The mysteries of the sea
I have never heard of this one. Thanks for telling of it and it's treasures beauty in the story...mac
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Thank you mac for reading my poem. I had fun writing it.
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What a wonderful idea.I will have to look out on Daughters day.lovely poem, Ros
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Thank you Ros, Do you live near the Ocean? Glad you like the poem.
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