So sweet and dangerous is this thing that u place on my lips…..
So delicious is this sent that you breathe in to my throat…..
So cold is the simply touch of your flesh pone mine……
Oh how great this feeling feel but how scared am I realy???
I’m not scared I have grown to love it!!!!
The feel, the taste, the smell, all of it11 I want it all…….
And you supply it all to me…..in a way u like it but then again I think that you enjoy it!!!!
But you get all tha lust out of it all the one thing that you thrive for is the blood that pumps through my veins......
And also some time when I had just meet you, I remember how you loved to scare me with the showing of your beautiful and deadly teeth,
I remember screaming an pleading for you to let me live….and you cuckled and grabed my throat and pulled me to you……
I started to cry and you bared your teeth to my throat….but when I scream all i could do was enjoy the pain that you have caused me......
then i die as an mortal and i am reborn a inmortal..
A contest entry
- Darke-hearte. by Dragonmind.
700 points, ended November 14, 2008, 15 entries
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Comments
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Nice one. Really nice. Apart from the occasional spelling mistake and other very few mistakes, this piece was really good blend of vampirism and erotica. I could see what you tried to portray. It was filled with emotion and eagerness. Keep writing ^^.
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Wonderful poem xx-angelpain-xx
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