Simple, glaring sun
floating shiney masking
Whispering wind,
golden clouds dancing diamond
in the air
It was laughing
slowly wind picks up
howling with laughter
until it is time to subside
Sand blowing in every direction
but...
sand got in the suns eye
so it went to the Milky Way
furious sun throws flaming astroid
in winds way
but...
Wind swirved out of the way.
Author notes
Her autograph says: For Ned - From Little k.
This is where I will save my little poets first poems until she one day makes her own page.
A special kid with a special place in this ol'poets heart.
(c) 11/7/08 by: Little k.
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Oh man, she's winning me over. She's so freaking adorable, this was great. And I am not saying it's great for a 10 year old, I am saying it's just great!
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wow
do you mean this piece is a workdone by your little k?
if so it's fabulous! if not it's still darn good!!
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