Ghostly vespers
nightly dreams,
flickering tricks
unravelling seams.
Falling deeper
darkness reigns,
talons clawing
mind insane.
Screaming silence
none will hear,
twilight brings
obscure frontiers.
Racing through
shadowy hours,
awaiting light
giving daylight's power.
Day's sweet breath
awakens heart,
streaming sunlight
grace imparts.
Author notes
Don't use any of the wordbank words.
1: the
2: of
3: to
4: and
5: a
6: in
7: is
8: it
9: you
10: that
11: he
12: was
13: for
14: are
15: on
16: with
17: as
18: I
19: his
20: they
21: be
22: at
23: one
24: have
25: this
In a list
A contest entry
- Anti Word Bank Ver 5.0 by Loki.
900 points, ended November 13, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please Tell Me What You Think
Comments
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Brilliant bit of darkness! Felt like some of my nightmares.. but yay for the sunlight's grace!
Flowed perfectly without those banned filler words!
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My gal
Question? Are you trying to copy me? lol Just kidding for I love the drk and as always this piece is perfecto.
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I think I would be lost should I be asked to not use any of these words, gee I used most of them already in this comment. Brilliant hun, you have such a talent, got a bit to spare? Best to you in the contest
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