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to bow before your beauty-----------

Where are you My dear?
I  am caught in fear

Have you slipped to a garden
where flowers greet you with a smile
or shipped to other side of the ocean
where you can hear about me, in no -notation?

or making a sojourn visit to star studded sky
where  rain bow is ready to bow before your  ardent beauty

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  • Angels Whispers gold member
    November 10, 2008
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    Beautiful penning my friend,
    I love this line.... Have you slipped to a garden
    where flowers greet you with a smile....

    and also this one.....or making a sojourn visit to star studded sky
    where  rain bow is ready to bow before your ardent beauty
    Your words are beautiful.

    All the best in the contest, with blessings of love and happiness.

     

    ~Angel-anne~ 


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    November 7, 2008

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    Just beautiful I love how you used the word rain bow in your last line.
    Thank you for such a creative take on the photo.
    Gaylene