scare of bee and I wouldn't have seen
it enter sawdust hole of a stump
as a flower of hiding
to make honey's high quality
juncture miscarriage without a buzz;
can't duct the viscid...
from bloodshot discovery
to hope by my tucked in thought
but for yellow of another day
softer than fermented bell pepper
apocopating popped off prematurely
yet soaked with dusting of inspiring pollen ~
I get a dance direction by not just a drone
to whom I gave name Daisy never for him to have only
nor nectar of tear rather than next
in perennial period
Author notes
Big_Red_Eyes_by_Gwarf
A contest entry
- PIF... by Leonura.
900 points, ended November 11, 2008, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
please leave off good luck, unnatural emoticons, applause symbols...hypes
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thanks, parenchma, for planting something for me to reply to
I do get more of a glimpse of being happy's from wondering what can happen. and it could be so tied as to what might be shares even ecologically outwards towards significance of earth not being for blank and neither birth capping... something so simple as seeing a grasshopper having capacity to eat through cayenne with capsaicin simply not neutralized, because it doesn't have a nervous system bothered, can have use beside it at older stage when seeds are opposite deposited poison effect but very good checkmark without hiccup. so much opens up how we aren't subtly paralyzed if we don't jump to conclusions ~ {for bounce back}
a moment of many,
called Carolyn
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Thank you very much for your entry.
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you're welcome, Leonura with delicate challenge
you set my craving to the intensifier that senses a celebration, thanks for the bronze alloyed by allowed looks at photograph and life in general until...
it felt good to be prompted,
called Carolyn
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thank you, Cannonsfire, for your moment with my poem
I know I've seen the wrapped up thought left with a rose icon before alone but here it even reflects the piece with a sampled coloring, and my fingers hold on things loosely in quiet for its budding so circulated...
such imaging didn't have to hide behind applause symbols of non contiguous collages lol which I requested against to not come across squawking,
called Carolyn
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