Bitter words
imprint lasting scars
as hope dies and withers
{this is what I've become.}
A solitary creature
with no means for survival-
to die and be forgotten;
ocean's lair.
Author notes
So my chicka had a really cool pic and I missed out but I decided to do it any ways. This is what I got!
Artist Credit: http://azurylipfe.deviantart.com/art/Rumours-102492340
A contest entry
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What to do in an insane world?
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such a deep, yet sad write
well penned
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Jumped to this on a whim, Krystal! Brings to mind this, "I should have been a pair of ragged claws / scuttling across the floors of silent seas." (T.S. Eliot) Nice write- did you mean "solitude" or "solitary"? Just asking- some folks get pissed when I do that!
Love it no matter what!
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You know you're right! I did mean solitary....just couldn't think of it when...I was close! Thank you.
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So sad... deep set emotions here!
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such a sad write.. I'm here if you need me you know.. this is great ... I love it and I love you.... I love you more.. I've missed you lots. stick with me, and you won't feel like this anymore..
love you lots...
kat
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I know all of my fam is here....for me on this blessed site. Missed you lots too just haven't been on lately my muse has flown south for the winter! Lol...hope all is well with you. Love you lots!
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