Your were more than my world
I miss you more than the desert does rain
The times we sat at the beach and looked out
at the ocean or the time we kissed and sparks flew towards the heavens
To loose you without it being our choice pains me to the core
Dreaming of you, crying for you, waiting for my call back to you
Late nights and alcholol can only replace so much i never wanted to lose your touch
I would commit suicide but then i know i couldnt be with my beautiful angel
So for now i'll carry myself as best i can until the day we reunite and my heart
beats again then the pain will be gone and love and happiness will appear im desperate i love you my dear
A contest entry
- Prompt contest... 16 entries; 16 lines or less by Grey Mouser.
700 points, ended November 19, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Saddness flows throughout the write. Where such a devastating loss holds the soul stagnant. Yearning wholy with everything for the chance to retun to the way things were. Not moving on from the past. Thanks for entering into the contest.
Be well and be blessed,
Mouser -
beautiful and sad...wonderful poem, full of emotions. blessings always, best to you in the contest ~Trisha~
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oh this makes me want to cry! beautiful job on such a sad subject. I like this line: "Late nights and alcholol can only replace so much i never wanted to lose your touch" Wow. Great write. Good luck in the contest. Thx for sharing!
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