children's inches
not known in centimeters wrapped around
world in gift of life garbled video game
doing nothing becomes everything
let's see leisure shooting through cultan
until youngsters are strung
from mine modus operandi imaging item
to mineral needing minors whim of vim owned
centered Congo go radius isn't ration to guide ripest
thanks in growth but finish early
for results scaling sulks
to more alliteration to laziness
of levels for reading flux of fail to flow strange yet
draw close to whom no drawing of blank
is wonderful gels jealousy
to lens of chance
within color cone not truncated by rod
in nomad's addition of what else to see
oh hope that's not numbed even in storm
with pages preserved in rainbow
bookmark remotivating eye exercises
on scans of refugee rereading eating
more basic than cooking if without panic
spinach under lemon is one lullaby's lilt
and baby photo is not ego cute but relationship
fermenting formed from first day not day care but sleep and struggled help to giggle
A contest entry
- Let your mind explore by Learning2PaintYou.
550 points, ended November 8, 2008, 33 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
please leave off good luck, unnatural emoticons, applause symbols...hypes
Comments
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Good write and imagery.
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I love this! It's a tad bit confusing, but I think I got it. I like the message and all the descriptions. This is really great!
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Lady-Kalina I'm glad it had a liitle congruence to branch with you
ah thanks, I didn't want it to just be a squeak to myself.
news and my issues seemed to make it for calling out, but I never see clarity in those applause symbols lol --
called Carolyn
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