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Appears (Cover)

Cracked phone line
Means nothing
My brain's in fights and vain
My breathing
So shallow
It helps to curb the pain

What's outside?
Sneaks inside
How we contaminate
This warzone of my soul
I underestimate

(Chorus)
I've never really thought about it that much
It's only ever violence that's in my touch
Appears, appears, appears
I am built this way
Appears, appears, appears
I am built this way

The pills they, quit working
They take more than they give
Emotions on flat line
It's all that I can give

The rising
The falling
My mind keeps tricking me
It throws me a life raft
Then leaves me out at sea

I've never really thought about it that much
It's only ever violence that's in my touch
Appears, appears, appears
I am built this way
Appears, appears, appears
I am built this way

I've never really thought about it that much
It's only ever violence that's in my touch
Appears, appears, appears
I am built this way
Appears, appears, appears
I am built this way

Author notes

this is a cover. It's a rare Korn song from See you on the other Side. I've got the lyrics down and will be learning the bass lines to it, and guitar since our guitar player left cause of drugs...

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  • ArtRocks27
    November 7, 2008

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    Hmmm...i like the way it goes together. I want to see the youtube version now dang it! It would probably help me get a tune in my head. But I like the way it goes so far, I'm just interested in how the music will flow with the words.