We were one
Then I am none
You made me less
than I was before we met.
When we became one
it was to be forever.
Now it seems
it will be forever
before I am whole.
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Mylee
A contest entry
- I'm alone......are you? by movedon.
700 points, ended November 25, 2008, 103 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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LOVE IT
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So sorry that you are hurting, it is obvious that someone has taken your heart and torn it -
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Thanks for reading the contest rules correctly. The last 3 lines are amazing. A feeling of dread overwhelmed me today and those sentences really hit how i was feeling. Thank you for taking the time to enter dear poet. Best of luck be to you.
ing alone,
Mylee -
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Thanks for the contest dear!
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