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With This Ring

Anticipating  love


I wrote,

                affirmed.... 

                                    as true,


enticingly of journeys through long nightly mists
explored, and inhaled an ethereal bliss

with never regret for the taste of your kiss;
while alstwhile you lured and I ached to believe,

that with each space of breath that envelops our days,
the do's, don'ts and dramas wherein our life plays

is simply the essence of what we would be
if only I'd ask..."Won't you give this to me?"



Author notes

I always marvel at the precision of answered affirmations even though we may have forgotten ourselves what we asked for Fun link http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8mVEGfH4s5g

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  • Swan song gold member
    November 28, 2008

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    I love the way you put this on the page That is nothing less then tremendous it is so good I can barely spell. Beautiful dear!


  • moon2u
    November 15, 2008

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    aha, but perhaps this affirmation
    may be honoured in the not too distant future...

    keeping my fingers crossed
    hugs Moony


  • Janice M Pickett
    November 6, 2008
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    So true so true, thank you for your entry it is lovely.