Anticipating love
I wrote,
affirmed....
as true,
enticingly of journeys through long nightly mists
explored, and inhaled an ethereal bliss
with never regret for the taste of your kiss;
while alstwhile you lured and I ached to believe,
that with each space of breath that envelops our days,
the do's, don'ts and dramas wherein our life plays
is simply the essence of what we would be
if only I'd ask..."Won't you give this to me?"
Author notes
I always marvel at the precision of answered affirmations even though we may have forgotten ourselves what we asked for
Fun link http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8mVEGfH4s5g
A contest entry
- I want to read your affirmations by Janice M Pickett.
1000 points, ended November 13, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I love the way you put this on the page That is nothing less then tremendous it is so good I can barely spell. Beautiful dear!


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aha, but perhaps this affirmation
may be honoured in the not too distant future...
keeping my fingers crossed
hugs Moony

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So true so true, thank you for your entry it is lovely.



