running,
from the red
jaws of desire
-only in my dreams.
in reality, I never run.
standing on the edge
waiting for you
hoping this day
won’t be my last.
stepping forward,
arms and fangs outstretched;
I’m with you forever.
Author notes
prompt: kiss
40 words on the dot 
vampires?
---stupid writers block ruins everything 
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- Vampires! by poisonivystar4.
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That's sweet and romantic! Unfulfilled love mixed with eternal love, doesn't get better than that! Good luck in the contest!
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Good job. Thanks for entering and good luck!
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"in reality, I never run."
I like the clear statement this made, it's blunt but beautiful =]
This is not "ruined" either...
You really need to have more confidence in your work!!!! -
in reality, I never run.
standing on the edge
waiting for you
mm, this is interesting.
kindof reminds me of twilight.
i liiiike. (: -
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lol i was thinkin bout it at the time
im actually so in love with twilight / edward cullen / robert pattinson
its getting ridiculous haha
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Nice
Good images. I like the way it jumps out at me. Very passionate and sexy. -
ok, so no, its not your best. but it's not as bad as you might think either!
calm down, quit forcing it dear & it will come back. you're an amazing writer, every amazing write goes through a phase. also, you're young, lots of time to chill & allow yourself to grow, as a person, as a poet... as an artist
i'm glad my comments can lift your mood & spirit a bit ♥
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