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My Brave Big Brother.

A soldier is merely one we create for ourselves
A shoulder to cry on, protection, and faith
A loving soul who reaches out to help
A guiding light to aid you through your day

We have been dealt our unfair hands
But my dearest brother, there you have stood
By my side with a guiding heart
Not as a chore, but simply because you could

A father figure in my eyes
On the account we lacked our own
You stood brave, tall, and strong
Defeating battles as they were thrown

The man of the house
Among two sisters, and a mother
It is amazing to think where I would be
Without your love, my brother

I am blessed, truly am I blessed
I thank the heavens every opportunity I contain
For every minute, every second
Never do I complain

Everything happens for a reason
A saying we learn from everyday
I truly believe this for a fact
Because in my life, you found your way

Without you, there would be not a reason
Not a proven fact to live
Thank you, my soldier, my brother...
For bestowing all you have to give.

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  • dustytiger
    November 19, 2008

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    this is a very nice tribute to your brother, i can tell just from reading this how proud you are of him for being a soldier, great poem, best of luck in the contest


  • Crazy9Piano8Freak
    November 8, 2008

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    Wonderful!!!

    This is an awesome tribute for a soldier and brother. You shoul definately show this to him. Great job - I love it!!! - Good luck in my contest!
    ~Koko~