What do you see, when you look at me?
What do you want to say, when you look my way?
You stuck? I'll start...
I see a boy
A happy, healthy boy
He'll make a great man one day
Devoted to his Lord
Loves his friends
And would die for either one
Amazing musician, talented and blessed
But there's something I missed
I've noticed you looking at me and it's in your eyes
Everything is revealed, you stare at me
And you're confused
Your eyes search mine and I know you know
But you're confused
Is it me? Something I've said or something I did?
Is it someone else? Someone I don't know
Is it both? Is it having to make a choice?
Or is it that you don't understand how I can like you,
When I don't know you
Author notes
I wrote this about my most recent crush. So confused...
Comments
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Oh, very sweet! By reading your words, I can tell you're very thoughtful about this guy.
It's lovely when one writes lightly about love, and it's not something sappy and sugar-coated . . . young love in the form of poetry makes the poet sound more mature, in contrast to the rest of the cliche stuff about it you see on here.
"Your eyes search mine and I know you know
But you're confused"
I think those lines give a lot of insight on your crush's point of view, since he's not the one who's writing this poem! And it emphasizes the theme of your piece as well as the title.
Nice job, and keep it up! I haven't seen any of your work in a while!
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haha i'm such a blond lol cool poem
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