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Remember

Remember your creator in the days of your youth,

So that  you may stay forever young, and that these years

shall not come when you shall have no pleasure in living-

in the day when the nervous system shall tremble, and

the strong back, the bones shall bow themselves,

and the teeth will cease grinding because they are few,

and the eyes that look out the windows of the body

[the house] be darkened,

and when you shall be fearful of heights,

and the almond tree shall flourish [gray hair]

and even the most delciate food [the grasshopper]

shall shall be a burden to the digestive system,

and the streets shall be blocked [bowels]

and the desire for love

shall fail...

Author notes

these thought came to me while reading the first part of
ECCLESIASTES CHAPTER 12 .
It is written here as I precieved it.
Just a thought.

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  • Angelo di Luce gold member
    November 9, 2008

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    My sweet soul, how wonderfull you are
    I love reading you so pure thoughts, that you express so well
    Well done Judy


  • poeticweaver silver member
    November 6, 2008

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    Well Expressed.

    Thanks for sharing your poetic talent within the thoughts so divine you jot! Thanks for being you! Much love, your friend, Timothy aka poeticweaver~ x

  • Bob Fox
    November 6, 2008

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    Your thoughts

    as usual are very interesting and wonderful. The truth about life and the magic of your pen. And here I sit realizing that you have just defined a greater part of who I am.