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Oak leaf ballet

Swirls of color
played on their sidewalk stage

Frolicking pirouettes
spinning in the wind





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I saw the prettiest swirl of leaves today. I was going to make this longer, but it kind of says it all.

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  • Treasure 5 gold member
    February 22, 2009

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    neat

    Very nice detail and flow of words. It looks like the type of poem that I could easily add to, but I woun't. It is a wonderful piece of work. Pleasure to read.


  • Simply Olivia
    November 7, 2008
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    Nice!


  • LionessK silver member
    November 7, 2008
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    Yes, I think this does say all it needs to. Beautifully.
    I love autumn themed poetry.


  • drbauser
    November 6, 2008

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    i like this. it is a good reminder of how autumn is my favorite time of year. and no better way to enjoy winters approach but through the majesty of nature. good one!