Im so glad we met,
that day you spoke,
I listened, glorious voice,
I froze, I fell for you.
More than just a friend,
I felt my world shake, crumble,
You changed it, 360 turn,
I froze, I fell for you.
We talked, we laughed, we enjoyed,
Then finally it came,
My sea of love unleashed,
That kiss, the time stoped.
"Remind me of breathing" you said,
We laughed, our times, our joys,
We hugged, we laughed,
we kissed, time made a halt again.
Baby, just believe,
When I say your my world,
My top one priority,
Our love forever.
This crazy thing called love,
So insane but so logical,
So slow but so fast,
So understandable yet so difficult,
That freezes time,
That sets your arms aroun me,
Which jions our lips,
Which turns my inside out and my outside in.
A contest entry
- Seven Sensational Options!!! by xxRainbowDawnxx.
650 points, ended November 19, 2008, 26 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Oh it's so lovely to find someone who does this to you, they're one in a billion I tell you. I'm so lucky also.
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awww... this is such a cute and lovely write. i like the emotions that run through your words. they were feep and so beautiful. awesome write
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some typeos joins* and around*
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Awww baby this is so sweet!
Amazing, as usual. :]
I love you so muchhh
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