You were the sparkle in another's eyes,
For what they saw, was a beautiful prize.
Like looking up at clear blue skies,
Where a life with goodbyes,
Was not in supplies.
When you realize that you had remiss,
The space between you didn't exist,
In that last final kiss...
When you look up you see a disguise,
those once blue eyes.
They were a shade darker than sorrow,
The new goodbye of tomorrow.
Author notes
not a true story in my shoes, so sad if it would be.
(remiss means like a mistake.....wrote down so I wouldn't forget...)
lady bugs land on lee....right???
A contest entry
- I'm gunna give you points for your poems! by SmartBrick.
400 points, ended November 30, 2008, 67 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This better than you thought!I'll give the points later!( My note book is ALL the way downstairs in the basement,and I don't wanna walk down all those stairs...all 12 of 'em!
)So ya...I'm going to ignore the fact of *cough******...:LOL
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this is poo! (lol just kidding....inside joke...right courtney?)
AWESOME! i know who this is about.....
lol really sweet
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