there was once a young girl
who had a friend
she thought she was one
who would stay til the end
the girl became ill
she stopped going to school
cause she used to be in bed all day
she never had any energy
though her friends said
'we'll come round dont you worry'
she never used to go to school
yet her friend used to come round
she still used to care for her
even though she was never around
the friend used to ring aswell
just to see if she was alright
they always used to talk
late into the night
then came the college years
and the friend just changed
she never used to ring or pop over
she didnt treat her the same
it was like she was forgetting her
that she no longer cared
the girl got more ill
depressed and more scared
now it just seems the friend
no longer wants to know the girl
she doesnt seem to care
what happens to her
and she just doesnt care
that shes about to leave this world.......
A contest entry
- Quickie Anyone?? by Sweet Impatience.
950 points, ended November 8, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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i like it :]
it tells a good story. well a sad story. but you told it great! -
this is a sad poem that's filled with strong emotions. I felt so many different emotions as I was reading this poem. I like your take on the prompt.
good luck
kat
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thanks alot
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loved the story and the way you put it...
very well written and laid out..
thanks for sharing !
Shuberth
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