One more stitch
Has been undone
Cut
By the scissored of your heart
With each pulled string
I fall deeper
With each cut
I rip apart
You once put me back together
Once held me strong
Now
Your laying cracks in my heart
A contest entry
- Love: Both Ends of the Spectrum by Itzamna.
550 points, ended November 25, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
emo, sad, pain
Comments
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i take it you mean lying, in the last line. i personally think that if you put the last stanza first, it would be a better overall read. the way it is now, the last stanza kind of switches everything around so fast, i have to stop and wrap my mind around changing from the present, back to the past
-andi
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