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Yesterday's Dreams

Many wars and battles
Brought us here
To where we stand proud

May we never forget
Those who have fought
To uphold
Our country
Our freedom

For it was won
With yesterday's blood
And yesterday's tears
And yesterday's dreams

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  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    November 14, 2008

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    Beautiful Melancholy...

    Awesome imagery!! Thank you for sharing your heart-and-soul-felt poem with all of us!! Wishing all the best to you, always. Peace, love & hugs, xx Cyn xx


  • dustytiger
    November 11, 2008

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    beautiful poem, you have captured the essence of what we are here to honour and respect on this somber day, you didn't get fancy or put opinions in, it's amazing, best of luck in the contest


  • mysticstorm gold member
    November 7, 2008

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    Such lovely words of truth...many things are built on yesterday's dreams...nicely done...thank you for entering.
    mystic