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two sedoka

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kelp crowns her head
swimming like Medusa's hair
tethered to the rock bound  bay

Seagulls now advance
playing with her curls of green
periwinkles cling to her

the beach was alive
kelp mites hatching every where
scampering across the rocks

spiders just appear
like a Harry Potter day
natures creatures now at play

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  • sunoir
    November 6, 2008
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    I could envision the poem (tanka), wonderful imagery.