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three tanka

Missing image
sunlight and shadow
constant interplay of light
playing with my mind
photographs,images half seen
like ghosts hiding in plane sight

rain against clear glass
muted colors blend and pass
all are etched in rain
falling leaves now plastered flat
framing my canvass of glass

in serene comfort
evening stillness settles 
stress now dissipates
leaving only soft whispers
of the days passages

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  • Dark Otter
    November 7, 2008

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    I like!

    I think I've finally gotten a handle on your style. Are you a cancer? You seem to have a great love for your home and hideaway!


    • Draig aine gold member
      November 7, 2008
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      Tanks

      hmm, thank you, my style changes aot but I live the simplicity and cadence of Eastern Verse, I am attached to home, but I am an Aries with a Virgo moon and Leo rising, I am in a nesting and rising mode right now, I am attached to the land, more then the building, the earth sky ocean, my Lover is a sojourner, so I nest while he s climbing mountains or crossing desserts or what ever he is off doing, while i tend goats and sheep, make cheese, paint write, what ever the season takes me, it is the one word, the phrase or sentence that floats my boat and I am a sucker for sci fi . fantasy adventure