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A Heart Will Mend

A creature of beauty searching her mind,
trying to make sense of the insanity.
Carelessly treated by a broken bottle
now the diamond is soiled. 
The mind decieves telling her lies
making her doubt her own worth.
Years of trust crumble to rubble
walls will rise from debris.
Weighed by sense of responsibility
death becomes an unaffordable luxury.
In her mind she knows nightmares are real
our worst fears can come true.
But, this truth she has known in her heart,
we're strongest in our weakest hour.

As sure as a wilted rose is reborn in spring
a broken heart will mend with a new love.



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Quote: "The heart feels things the eyes cannot see, and knows what the mind cannot understand"
Robert Vallet

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  • Paloszoo gold member
    November 12, 2008

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    Love the ending of this awesome piece! Thanks for entering my contest. I'm honored to have you share your work here. Good luck!


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    November 9, 2008

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    Wow. I am speechless. This is incredible. Very well written. Thank you for entering and good luck in the contest.