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Dreams of Yesterday

Visions of future events
during childhood dreams
never consisted
of breath-taking penthouse views
from above a landfill.



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Prompt Contest
Contest Prompt: "Yesterday's Dreams"

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A contest entry

GIVE ME YOUR HONEST REACTION

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  • lunarlunacy
    November 8, 2008

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    You have expressed so much in so few words, a very succintly poignant work. Congratulations on your gold.


  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    November 8, 2008

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    Now I see why this won gold in my kindreds contest. What a brilliant colour outside the lines interpretation of the prompt, with such a truth in the lines. This was a most enjoyable read. Best to you and Congratulations on your gold win


  • mysticstorm gold member
    November 7, 2008

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    WOW! I love this...I feel this way so much in my life...amazing how dreams are never what life gives us...well done...thank you for sharing!
    mystic