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I'm waiting...

Do you know i'm here?
Because i know you are...
I can see you day after day
Writing, drawing, working hard...

It's funny
Most would simply toss me aside
Yet you looked at me
more than once...

I laugh it off but that feeling
The creep up my spine
It wants me to act

I want to but I cant
If I do then you will know who I am
You will stop looking at me
And I will fade

Until that time when you lean in
Until that kiss
Until that dream comes true...

I'm Waiting....



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  • Do I look good
    December 28, 2008
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    This was great. I like the way you let out the point in your poem.


  • ASmileForYou
    December 17, 2008

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    This was really good. It is always good to hear from perspectives that are normally silenced. I enjoyed this a lot!! Thanks!


  • Guerrero
    December 16, 2008

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    i think this is really good.. you should make yourself known.. i know thats hard because hell its almost impossible to make ppl see you when then are blind.. but all we can do is try i guess. amazing write.


  • erica kiwi
    November 9, 2008
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    this is the cutest ever! i love it. [:


  • xXxMandy-pantsxXx
    November 6, 2008
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    My Favorite your too amazing Colin =D

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