Do you know i'm here?
Because i know you are...
I can see you day after day
Writing, drawing, working hard...
It's funny
Most would simply toss me aside
Yet you looked at me
more than once...
I laugh it off but that feeling
The creep up my spine
It wants me to act
I want to but I cant
If I do then you will know who I am
You will stop looking at me
And I will fade
Until that time when you lean in
Until that kiss
Until that dream comes true...
I'm Waiting....
A contest entry
- Give me more! by ASmileForYou.
700 points, ended January 7, 69 entries
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Comments
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This was great. I like the way you let out the point in your poem.
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This was really good. It is always good to hear from perspectives that are normally silenced. I enjoyed this a lot!! Thanks!
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i think this is really good.. you should make yourself known.. i know thats hard because hell its almost impossible to make ppl see you when then are blind.. but all we can do is try i guess. amazing write.


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this is the cutest ever! i love it. [:
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My Favorite your too amazing Colin =D


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