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fragmented dreams

fragmented dreams
cross the pretty night sky

bright shiny gleams
in the giant black eye


dreams about love
dreams filled with hope

dreams up above
dreams made by dope


forgotten and torn,
hung on the wall

tired, forlorn.
catch them! (they fall!)


fragmented dreams
cross the pretty night sky

bright shiny gleams
are your is a blink of the eye

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  • OutsideTheMirror
    November 13, 2008
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    "dreams made by dope"
    What? Marijuana seems a little out of place in this one


    • Sweet Zephyr
      November 13, 2008
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      yeah...

      yeahhhh.... me too but i found this poem in my writing notebook and that's what i wrote. maybe i'll change it, it does seem a little odd