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Pain Never Felt this Good




Supple skin
awaits a longing kiss,
as heartbeats quicken
and angels are blessed.

Dancing nightmares
breathe into our souls,
yet none know better then we
for it us that is foretold.

A dark embrace
presents itself with a silver lining
this is what all have spent their lives for -
a lover's kiss so sweet, so deadly
we don't fight back- we grasp;
never letting go....

 

 

 

Author notes

Prompt: Picture (I don't know who to credit)

Rules:

15 poets
Nothing over 30 lines nothing less then 10
Please use spell check.


14 lines of darkness my queen....

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  • Angelflower
    November 14, 2008

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    This was a darkly romantic take on the prompt that I greatly enjoyed you did such a wonderful job with this write. thank you very much for sharing. best of luck int contest.

    Angel


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    November 8, 2008
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    Perfect for that picture! Darkly romantic!