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What can I say?

Longing to feel your hands
Secure around my waist,
I want to feel you pull me closer
And kiss me the way only you can,
I need to feel your warm, sweet breath
As you whisper softly to me.

But your beautiful are no where to be seen,
Your gentle skin, so out of reach,
Perfect rouge lips,
Too far from my lips, then yearn for yours.

My picture perfect girl,
My brilliant little beauty,
But what I'm still coming to terms with,
Is the fact that you're mine.

What can I say?
I miss you.
I want you.
I need you.

I love you.

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I <3 my little cupcake.

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  • alexandra.
    November 11, 2008
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    Oh doll, this is adorable.
    Plain&Simple&Perfect.

    I've grown to hate reading your pieces.
    They're so bleeding brilliant, my self esteem is plummeting down as I read each line.


    (nah, they're brilliant&I love reading them)

    She a lucky,lucky,lucky girl.

    XXX