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Inspired

She said:
"Find a cure, Find a cure for my life, Find a cure."
And I've never been so damn sure;
for once everything was a big illusion,
and I wasn't the first to come to this conclusion.
I'm half buried in my grave,
while the other half is pulling on your ankles.
I got a great beat in my head,
the rhythm in my shoulder,
the words in my eyes.
Today my lips will birth the sunshine.

Author notes

The quote belongs to Ida Maria and my inspiration is The Cloud Cult "Lucky Today"

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  • Lucian Valcor
    November 7, 2008
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    dude this is awesome u need to add more to it she to short to me


  • quiet.mind-ed
    November 7, 2008

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    oh wow. this seems very lyrical to me. i want a chorus and another verse to this.
    i love the first three lines:
    She said:
    "Find a cure, Find a cure for my life, Find a cure."
    And I've never been so damn sure;

    let me know if you add more

    -andi