Midnight's here
I'm still not done
I can't stay up any longer
Too bad the year's over; I did my level best
To keep it in place
But Time keeps rolling on,
And down I go
Down Nature's Ladder.
There it goes,
There it goes again.
What a sour finale.
Author notes
Might've 'borrowed' the title from the lyrics of an 'Ok Go' song. Maybe. 
Last season in a four-part thing I'm doing for some awesome contests.
A contest entry
- QUICKIE: seasons [3/4] by etoile.
550 points, ended November 17, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comment. Do it.
Comments
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i liked the last line a lot. it was a brilliant ending and it really hit hard. it described winter very well, being the final/last season. so good take on the prompt, and nice imagery.
thanks for entering and goodluck
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