It beats me what you see in that guy,
with his big butt that blocks out the sky.
I don't think you know what he is really like,
that womanizing bastard, with a nose like a pike.
He will promise you this and maybe that
and I bet what he gives you is a lot of useless tat.
Of course I am not jealous, how dare you suggest,
but if I get my hands on him, I will lay him to rest.
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I liked this work! Very amusing and a good read in my honest opinion. THANKS for sharing!
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you expressed yourself well. ood job.
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Funny and quite a denial! Well written and a great read.
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it was very sweet but funny at the same time, its nice for a man to be protective, loved the poem
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Jealsousy
Thank you for your comment. It was meant to be slightly tongue in cheek.
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Very good poem, well written
The flow is good, as is the rhyming,
I think you meant
"if I get my hands on him,"
Instead of "it"
But that's a minor mistake,
All together, a very good piece!
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JEALOUSY
Thank you for your comment and yes you are correct it should be if. I have now changed it, thank you.
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