Heaven's gate opens his war-like fence;
old voices lay down weary tongues.
Peace infects now all beings,
to recall foolish acts
written in earth's scent
with sweat and blood;
just to catch
falling
luck.
Author notes
Picture Inspired. Picture is : Autumn Scarecrow by Lin Howard
A nonet.
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Interesting.....lots to ponder here....aesthetics are off considerably.....perfect count....thank you for entering.....I still have to ponder this
Nice job....your score shall be sent to your Host,
Bear ~
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Thanks ~Bear, I didn't mind the easthetics now, knowing you, you surely will
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A good write and interesting take on the picture prompt. A skillfully crafted nonet. Nice metaphor.
Good flow and tone. Nice imagery. Lovely depth of feeling. Good word choice, nice alliteration and assonance. Thank you for your entry.
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I really enjoyed this... a nice write in a unique form... Well done and best of luck...
Ken
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Well done Nevel, this is a lovely nonet. Good luck in the contest. Val
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Great Nonet form.
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Great work!
Blessings' always love your flow
Rend
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How creative! Good Nonet form and quite interesting narrative.
Thanks for entering, best of luck in contest.
Dennis
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