You come up behind me late at night
wrap your arms around me to ease the chill
then your mouth is at my throat kissing me
sending shivers down my spine
I look in your eyes and see
you love me and I to love you
then like fire to oil
your holding me and kissing me again
only this time you NEVER let me go
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt. by Angelflower.
700 points, ended November 14, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
so what do you think?
Comments
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Ah..tis warm poetry and the scenario is completely magical and sweet with the words of your sugary feelings..well done..
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THis was a really good take on the prompt. There was an intensity about it! thank you very much for sharing. Best of luck in the contest.
Angel
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Very well written, an interesting view of love within this poem. Seeing love as comfort and powerful with your imagery. Great read
Good luck
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