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Alone

Alone in my thoughts,alone in a room full of people.

alone in a house by yourself I'm so alone even if i have someone in the house with me.They're watching tv and i'm alone listening to music. Sometimes you think you want to be alone but then you don't.Being alone and feeling alone can eat at you it's a terrible feeling.

When my gram was alive she lived next door to us.She sat alone in her house.It would upset me knowing she was alone.I wouldn't be content till i went and stayed with her.as long as i was in the house and near her then i would feel better.

not visitng a elderly friend or family memeber would upset me because then i would feel that their lonley because i didn't visit and it's my fault.

Being alone is such a awful feeling, even when your not completly alone..

it's depressing and heart wrenching.alone is not something anyone wants to be.

Being alone in your thoughts can be to deep and far off place to be.

We sometimes think being alone is best but sometimes is better for us to be among people.

But then again being among to many people can make you want to be alone to find quiet.

Being alone can have it's benefits and it's downfalls.

Just as long as we don't go to far into ourselves to be alone.

Author notes

Being alone is such a deep feeling.sometimes it's to over powering to feel that alone.even if someone else is in the house.you can still be alone in your thoughts.which is to far and to deep to be.

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  • Paloszoo gold member
    November 21, 2008

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    aaaaw, this is such a good piece of writing, which I can truly relate to. I'm married, but I feel alone most of the time. We pass each other in silence more often than not. I can be anywhere with anyone and feel alone. It's a terrible feeling. You've hit the nail on the head. Well done!


  • condor gold member
    November 21, 2008

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    Excellent write about a subject which does affect so many people, no matter who they are or where they are. Everyone needs there time alone, but as you pointed out, you can be so alone, even in a crowd. It is sad that some people are so alone in their hearts. You sound like a wonderful person with so much care and loving to give to those around you. I thought this piece was so fantastic and straight to the point. Well done indeed.


  • Rose Angel gold member
    November 6, 2008

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    Brenda ....communicating your feelings, is a good thing...You are the one to share what it means to feel lonely...and others will be ministered to....Keep writing and sharing...It helps...This is a good write....good penning!

  • mcheadle
    November 6, 2008

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    I read you were sick.

    I hope you are doing better. Being alone while sick can about eat one up. If it wasn't for the computer and my brother who I had to call well thank God they were there Amen. This is very hard on a person. Writting is a good way out. even looking a book and write stories from the pictures helps fill in the hours. To look out the window and watch nature on the move can haveit's humor. You take care and write something so I can find you on here and I be glad to take some of your time and give you something new to think about. You cn put it in my messages or notes I love friends to say remember me...mac