Wind against my face
I continue at my pace
Searching for the one
To fix what he has done
The memories of him
Flood my mind so grim
Wishing I could hide
Out comes the bad side
My spirit transforming
My blood needs warming
Searching for my undesired prey
I must figure out another way
Sucking the young woman’s blood
My emotions begin to flood
I want so bad to stop
Yet I suck down the last drop
I do not know what I’ve done
This was all caused by the one
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt. by Angelflower.
700 points, ended November 14, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Oh wow. Excellent take on the prompt. Major kudos for that. This is a great write. Keep up the great writing.
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This was a really interesting take on the prompt. I liked the rhyme, it seemed like it would fit the picture perfectly. Thank you very much for sharing. Best of luck in the contest!
Angel
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I like this one.Dark,captivating and well written.The image you use is just great.Nice imagery.
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nicely written the ending is a little unfinal though is that how u intended
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