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his likeness

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in the pond -
my father's face
or mine?
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  • Bruce silver member
    January 15
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    Oh yes! A great Aha moment there! Really a wonderful poem.

  • Bjarne gold member
    November 7, 2008

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    Would Have Never Guessed It

    Bravo... super strong piece with a lot of resonance among us, the graying lot.

    And, by the way, as we age, don't we acquire more countenance from whence we were made?

    You remain predictable, I appreciate the opportunity to read and learn every time you post.

    Thanks
    bjarne


    • haikumonk gold member
      November 7, 2008
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      Thanks so much. I appreciate your great comment!


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    November 6, 2008
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    You are brilliant! ...I love this.


  • Blushfulmoon silver member
    November 6, 2008

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    excellent~

    Love the haiku and how you formed it
    I have up a new one too drop by when ya can
    Hugs
    Susan~~~


    • haikumonk gold member
      November 7, 2008
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      Hi Susan... thanks! And you're new one is beautiful. Hope you're feeling good these days. You always have my prayers.


  • Sai Babas Lotus
    November 6, 2008

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    A wonderful haiku! I like the imagery and alliteration. Lay out is splendid too. I've felt that with my nose!

    Char

    • haikumonk gold member
      November 7, 2008
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      Hey Char... thanks for commenting. Always appreciate you coming by.


  • Peteskid gold member
    November 6, 2008
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    sometimes for me it is the hands...very nice...PK


    • haikumonk gold member
      November 7, 2008
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      Hey... thanks for commenting. Yeah, I see it in the hands too. Amazing how genetics works.

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