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Thoughts of Hope

There’s a light in my mind
And a tightness that binds
Yet the darkness is all that is calling
Take my hand step away
Please don’t beg me to stay
Hear the night that so softly is calling

Reach up high touch the sky
Fill my life with your hope
Spin around hold your ground
Take a bow for all those that are standing

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inspired by stairway to heaven

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  • poet2angels gold member
    November 12, 2008

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    This is beautiful!
    Such a softness and Heavenly sound...I love the lines:
    "There’s a light in my mind
    And a tightness that binds
    Yet the darkness is all that is calling"

    So real
    TY for entering!

    Lynda




  • Nature Song silver member
    November 6, 2008

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    When we listen we can hear HIS voice calling us out of the darkness that surrounds us. Very touching poem! What a great tribute to the song Stairway to Heaven! Awesome write my friend. ~Sie